So here’s the conclusion of the first week! I really hope ya’ll enjoyed it. I will do my best to keep them coming and to make them funnier and more entertaining as I go. Next week we get to see some of the other main characters. So stick around!
-Will
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Panel 1 - Ki: "sorry to hear your folks is splittin' up. that's harsh, el." "I'm really goin' miss you if you go, girl."
Panel 2 - Elysium: "That's the worst part, Ki... I finally have friends here. I finally have a home. I don't want to start all over again!" "It's so lonely being the new kid all the time-- you know?"
Panel 3 - Ki: "well... maybe sumpin' coo' is waiting for you in Texas?"
Panel 4 - Elysium: "What could possibly be cool in Texas?!"
Panel 2 - Elysium: "That's the worst part, Ki... I finally have friends here. I finally have a home. I don't want to start all over again!" "It's so lonely being the new kid all the time-- you know?"
Panel 3 - Ki: "well... maybe sumpin' coo' is waiting for you in Texas?"
Panel 4 - Elysium: "What could possibly be cool in Texas?!"
Very nice job in the first week to tell a story with only 20 panels and already I am feeling bad for the girl having to move and be the new kid. Just excellent story telling. Keep it up!
Thank you Sir! I appreciate your comment, and thanks for checking it out!